Before we sleep(original)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74yRhUVNktc

this is a song i have written. Recoding sucks.i did it with a headset microphone. Tell me what you think. also suggest a name.
lyrics:
" we are here now, please tell me its time for the world to get lost.

lets just get a glass, we'll sit by the balcony and drink.

I'll sing you sad songs I've written for you my love
I'll play you everything my heart can think of
and tell you, I can change
for truth, I'll be the same.

we can roll a joint, and smoke into the night and get high.

love will be in the air, emotions will fly so high.''

thank you.